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review the text #1

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arch-user-france1 opened this issue Jan 14, 2023 · 0 comments
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review the text #1

arch-user-france1 opened this issue Jan 14, 2023 · 0 comments

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the language of the text is terrible with a lot of mistakes, and I wouldn't name all those potential users of tor anyways.
you should also replace "computer users" with a standalone "users". Makes not sense add that "computer".
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