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 ## Intended users
 
-Primarily intended for Data Analysts in the Data and Analytical Services Directorate, the Analytical Platform also hosts users from:
+Primarily intended for Data Analysts, in the Data and Analytical Services Directorate, the Analytical Platform also hosts users from:
 - Criminal Injury Claims (CICA)
 - HM Courts & Tribunals Service (HMCTS)
 - HM Prison and Probation Service (HMPPS)
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 The Analytical Platform incorporates a variety of technical tools and concepts. To use the platform, as a minimum we recommend you have a working knowledge of the following:
 
 - Amazon Athena and S3 - to create, manipulate and query data
-- GitHub and GitHub Actions - to manage your Analytical Platformplication code
-- Python or R - to develop Analytical Platformplications on the Analytical Platform
+- GitHub and GitHub Actions - to manage your application code
+- Python or R - to develop applications on the Analytical Platform
 - SQL - to query and transform data
 
 ## Benefits of Using the Analytical Platform 
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 ### Modern Data Tools and Services
 
 - the ability to freely install packages from CRAN and PyPI to perform advanced analytical techniques, such as text mining, predictive analytics and data visualisation
-- compatibility with current cloud data services, such as Amazon Athena, Glue and Redshift, offering scalability and a managed service at commodity pay-as-you-go prices
+- compatibility with current cloud data services, such as Amazon Athena, Glue and Redshift, offering scalability and a managed service
 
 ### Centralised Data