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news/2025/2025-01-10-bn-mentorship-cycle-4.md

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-For those who aren't on the loop, the BN Mentorship Program is a [Nomination Assessment Team](/wiki/People/Nomination_Assessment_Team)-led effort to try and give modders interested in joining the [Beatmap Nominators](/wiki/People/Beatmap_Nominators) the skills they may be lacking to do so. Participants get mentored on how to mod in the way a BN is expected to, given tips on how to optimize their workflow and given crucial insight as to how to avoid common modding pitfalls.
+For those who aren't in the loop, the BN Mentorship Program is a [Nomination Assessment Team](/wiki/People/Nomination_Assessment_Team)–led effort to try and give modders interested in joining the [Beatmap Nominators](/wiki/People/Beatmap_Nominators) the skills they may be lacking to do so.
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+Participants get mentored on how to mod in the way a BN is expected to, with tips on how to optimize their workflow and crucial insight for avoiding common modding pitfalls.
 
 Cycles last around 2 months, with this cycle being planned to run from **January 25th** to **March 23rd**.
 
 ## Mentors
 
-Below you'll find a list of mentors for each game mode, alongside their timezones:
+Below you'll find a list of mentors for each game mode, alongside their time zones:
 
 ### ![osu!](/wiki/shared/mode/osu.png "osu!") osu! mentors